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Mar. 10th, 2006 @ 12:28 am eahhhhhhhhhhhhh iam drunk
gutscape promenade, sea fearing fairy's fled
dark alliance under my bed, tips down my head
two angles kiss n make a wish
the soda pop stain, looks like a lost lake break in the light
four flies fall from one swat of a swingin pot
to say what if and who about
its like two monkeys dukeing it out
over a banana balanced world
in less than a shallow girl
the red lines spiral, in the dead of the fire
her skirt blows up from the wind
beautiful sun sets diving in to get wet
flames a glow mandamusing show
glad i bought tickets in advance
glad i asked her to dance
marbles roll across the floor
please don't close that door
the others glows green
i jump through the screen
find what i left behind
and care less for this time i cut it off n left back at home
its all about the un and knots
i wish i could finish this book of thoughts
to dark and obscene, to bare seen, to who has more beautify than ever before been
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From:alicesdaze
Date:March 12th, 2006 06:04 am (UTC)
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& u said you cannot write...i like it
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From:jordansword
Date:March 16th, 2006 09:55 am (UTC)
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i like it too, i dont like words
From:(Anonymous)
Date:April 26th, 2006 06:17 pm (UTC)

hey sweety!

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wow jordan thats interesting just me danna seing wats up and figured id read some of your stuff i like it!
From:(Anonymous)
Date:December 22nd, 2006 07:22 pm (UTC)

hi jordan

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jordan, this poem is nice, but you've pissed me off to the last degree. i'm no longer talking to you, for you never answer my e-mails or anything. i still love you, nothing can change that. maybe if you would have taken advantage of me i wouldn't, but you didn't, so i dont. have a nice life.
Love
Danna